How Would You Rate This Headline?
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I received a mailing today promoting a stock newsletter. In big, bold type, the headline on the outer envelope reads: “Inside: Three stocks set to quadruple in price in the next 12 months.”
Now, if you are new to marketing financial products… you might think this is a good headline. But to anyone with experience, it’s fairly lame.
The problem is, I – and everyone else on the mailing lists used in financial direct mail – have read this headline (or others nearly identical) about a zillion times before. The lack of originality robs it of impact – and reminds us that it’s a pure sales pitch.
You can’t know this unless you are an active reader of financial direct mail. That’s why you need to be on as many mailing lists as you can – online and offline – and read all the print and Internet promotions that come your way.
Not only does this give you marketing ideas and show you what’s working, it also educates you on what has been done to the death – and should be avoided in your own promotional efforts.
Doctors, engineers, and scientists keep up with the latest developments and current activity in their respective fields. Marketers must, too.
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